A New Collection Analysis: Linked Tales of Suffering
Young Freya spends time with her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she meets 14-year-old twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they tell her, "is having one of your own." In the time that follow, they violate her, then inter her while living, combination of anxiety and frustration darting across their faces as they eventually free her from her improvised coffin.
This might have stood as the jarring focal point of a novel, but it's just one of numerous terrible events in The Elements, which assembles four short novels – released separately between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate historical pain and try to find peace in the contemporary moment.
Controversial Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's issuance has been clouded by the addition of Earth, the second novella, on the preliminary list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other candidates pulled out in objection at the author's gender-critical views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.
Discussion of trans rights is missing from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of significant issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the influence of mainstream and online outlets, parental neglect and sexual violence are all examined.
Distinct Narratives of Pain
- In Water, a grieving woman named Willow moves to a secluded Irish island after her husband is jailed for awful crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on trial as an accomplice to rape.
- In Fire, the adult Freya manages revenge with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a father flies to a memorial service with his adolescent son, and ponders how much to divulge about his family's background.
Suffering is accumulated upon suffering as wounded survivors seem doomed to meet each other continuously for all time
Linked Narratives
Connections multiply. We first meet Evan as a boy trying to leave the island of Water. His trial's panel contains the Freya who reappears in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one story reappear in cottages, taverns or judicial venues in another.
These narrative elements may sound complex, but the author knows how to power a narrative – his prior acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been translated into many languages. His straightforward prose bristles with thriller-ish hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to experiment with fire"; "the primary step I do when I arrive on the island is alter my name".
Character Development and Storytelling Strength
Characters are sketched in succinct, powerful lines: the empathetic Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes resonate with sad power or perceptive humour: a boy is punched by his father after having an accident at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour swap insults over cups of watery tea.
The author's knack of bringing you fully into each narrative gives the reappearance of a character or plot strand from an previous story a authentic excitement, for the first few times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is numbing, and at times nearly comic: trauma is accumulated upon pain, coincidence on accident in a dark farce in which wounded survivors seem doomed to bump into each other continuously for eternity.
Conceptual Complexity and Final Assessment
If this sounds not exactly life and more like purgatory, that is element of the author's thesis. These wounded people are oppressed by the crimes they have experienced, stuck in patterns of thought and behavior that agitate and plunge and may in turn hurt others. The author has spoken about the impact of his personal experiences of abuse and he describes with sympathy the way his characters navigate this risky landscape, striving for remedies – isolation, frigid water immersion, forgiveness or invigorating honesty – that might provide clarity.
The book's "basic" framing isn't extremely instructive, while the rapid pace means the examination of gender dynamics or digital platforms is primarily shallow. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a completely readable, trauma-oriented epic: a welcome rebuttal to the common preoccupation on authorities and offenders. The author demonstrates how pain can run through lives and generations, and how duration and tenderness can silence its reverberations.